WEI final

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Writing IVa: Portfolio
0.0. Overview

Reviews, Posts, and Words

Months	08	09	10	11	12	01	Totals
Book reviews	0	0	５	５	3	0	13
Blog posts	0	0	14	14	15	5	48
Words	0	0	1650	2341	2079	445	6515
TOTAL	---	---	---	---	---	---	---

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1.0. Movie Reviews

1.1. Showcase [+ links]	Dates on blog (yy.mm.dd)	¶	W	Notes
Toy Story	2007.10.10	5	211	I have seen this movie before so it’s not hard to write review but I couldn’t write long.
Kill Bill	2007.10.24	5	271	I have never seen this film and many friends told me that film is not interesting, so I worried about can I write well, but I felt is was interesting when I watch DVD. I could write longer than before. I want to see KILL BILL 2.
Romeo and Juliet	2007.11.15	3	183	I couldn’t write long. It was a too short.
Mrs Doubtfire	2007.11.21	5	291	At first, I did write detail about the movie but I couldn’t keep that in the end. The part of the end of this essay, I couldn’t write well.
School of Rock/Forrest Gump	2007.11.29	7	337	I could write well I think. I like this movie.
Lilo & Stich/Shrek	2007.12.19	8	467	I probably write too much content of the story but I could write many words.
Totals	---	33	1760	---

Key:

¶: number of paragraphs three or more sentences in length

W: number of words

1.2. Best Movie Review

Selection and Assessment: Which of those movie reviews do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Please remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.

• [Shrek is my best. I could write longest any other movie reviews and to write and think sentences and paragraph in English was not bothered me so much than before one.. ]

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2.0. Comments

Total number of comments (use dashboard)
Months	08	09	10	11	12	01	Total
	0	0	4	0	4	0	8

Most comments on:	Titles of posts with link	Dates of posts (yy.mm.dd)	Qualities of comments*[*]
Any one of your movie reviews	none
When did you respond to those comments?	---		---
How did you respond to those comments?	---	---
Any of your other posts*	Dinner		good
When did you respond to those comments?	---		---
How did you respond to those comments?	---	---	nothing

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* Current semester comments on essays and other posts
** Please list the most important qualities of comments on each type of blog post.

Recent comments display

Does your blog display recent comments from blog visitors in a prominent location, for example in a sidebar, header, or footer widget? Where or why not?

• I didn’t get many comments and responded them.0

Additional reflections on comments

• [I don’t get so many comments and I seldom response these.]

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3.0. Book Reviews

	Short titles with links	Dates (yy.mm.dd)	Words	Comments
Example:	Vampire Killer	07.05.16	39	1
2-01	Just Like a movie	2007.10.03	85	0
2-02	Black Beauty	2007.10.10	51	0
2-03	Sleepy Hollow	2007.10.17	56	0
2-04	Alice in Wonderland	2007.10.24	53	0
2-05	Bad Love	2007.10.31	119	0
2-06	Parallel	2007.11.07	112	0
2-07	The Big Picture	2007.11.14	186	0
2-08	Help!	2007.11.17	228	0
2-09	Hotel Casanova	2007.11.21	246	0
2-10	BLOOD DIAMONDS	2007.11.28	84	0
2-11	Men In Black	2007.12.05	180	1
2-12	LOST LOVE	2007.12.12	182	1
2-13	The Blue cat club	2007.12.21	186	1
2-14
2-15
2-16
2-17
2-18
---	---	TOTALS:	1768	3

Note: Please calculate book review words and comments totals without the example (above).

4.2. Best Book Review

Selection and Assessment: Which of those book reviews do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Please remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.

• [my best book review is Hotel Casanova. I could read enjoyable and could write review longer than another book review.]

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5.0. Additional reflections on your blog writing

• I didn’t write blog constantly, but when I started write blog, I could keep writing long time. At first, I don’t like to write English very much because I didn’t typing many words and thinking sentences but now, to think and type sentences in English is not bothered me than before.

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6.0. Suggestions for your peers and successors

• Do your best!!
• You should take many picture to write English with them.

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GET

I got these perfume very special price!!
I bought these at convenience store near my job place. This store will close soon so, many things are price down now. I didn’t know about that but my mother told me. I and y mother went the convenience store to buy some fragrance. The number of perfume was decreased but some of them still left. I chose these two. The left one, ordinary price is 1,500 yen at that store but I got it 750 yen. The right one is sale 3,000 yen at that store ordinary price but I got it half of price. My mother also bought another kind of perfume. We bought 3 kinds of perfume totally and these costs 3,000 yen totally. It was variable shopping for me.
(130 words)

Eat out

I went to eat out with my friend. We went to Toritetsu. It is a chicken dishes restaurant and the friend‘s work place. That day, she has no part time job so we went there to eat. We ate salad, the tip section of a chicken wing, grilled meat on a stick and drink some cocktails. These roast chicken were very delicious. Fortunately, we could drink cocktails half of price because my friend asked the clerk of the restaurant to that.
We talked about school life, friends, loves. We talked for two hours at least. I want to talk more but time was over. However, I had very good time at there. (112 words)

lovely dog♡

This is my dog. Name Purin. She was 8 or 9 years old maybe. She was very cute and friendly. She usually stays in my parent’s room but sometime when there is no one in the house, she walks around second floor. She comes to my room of course. She always lay my trash can waste. It was always bothered me. Unfortunately, she was died this month. The day before her dead, she came to my bed and we slept together. She was not unhealthy I though so, I was very sad. Still now, I can’t believe she wasn’t my home but she doesn’t exist. She came my family when I was elementary student so I grew up with Prin I feel so lonely. (124 words)

Rabbit of Seville

I knew this video from tomei. I introduce you it. please watch. I like this video.

(16 words)

mario

I like this video. I knew this video on Tomei’s writing class, so, probably you have already watched it at least once. When I watched it first, I couldn’t believe their wonderful jumping power. The music of Mario is suit their jump very much, and it’s makes that video funny. I want to jump and cross the building to building as they did. (63 words)

Illuminations☆

After we ate dinner, we went to down town. We went to Karaoke. The left picture is that time picture. That day was December 26th midnight so tree illuminations were very beautiful.
At the Karaoke, we sung songs all night we have been singing till morning. After we singing and left shop, we walked shimotori. There in no person. The right one is that picture. That morning was very cold. When I back home, I fell in sleep soon.
(79 words)