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2008年1月30日水曜日

WEI final

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Writing IVa: Portfolio
0.0. Overview

Reviews, Posts, and Words


Months

08

09

10

11

12

01

Totals

Book reviews

0

0

3

0

13

Blog posts

0

0

14

14

15

5

48

Words

0

0

1650

2341

2079

445

6515

TOTAL

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1.0. Movie Reviews

1.1. Showcase

[+ links]

Dates on blog
(yy.mm.dd)

W

Notes

Toy Story

2007.10.10

5

211

I have seen this movie before so it’s not hard to write review but I couldn’t write long.

Kill Bill

2007.10.24

5

271

I have never seen this film and many friends told me that film is not interesting, so I worried about can I write well, but I felt is was interesting when I watch DVD. I could write longer than before. I want to see KILL BILL 2.

Romeo and Juliet

2007.11.15

3

183

I couldn’t write long. It was a too short.

Mrs Doubtfire

2007.11.21

5

291

At first, I did write detail about the movie but I couldn’t keep that in the end. The part of the end of this essay, I couldn’t write well.

School of Rock/Forrest Gump

2007.11.29

7

337

I could write well I think. I like this movie.

Lilo & Stich/Shrek

2007.12.19

8

467

I probably write too much content of the story but I could write many words.

Totals

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33

1760

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Key:

¶: number of paragraphs three or more sentences in length

W: number of words

1.2. Best Movie Review

Selection and Assessment: Which of those movie reviews do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Please remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.

  • [Shrek is my best. I could write longest any other movie reviews and to write and think sentences and paragraph in English was not bothered me so much than before one.. ]

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2.0. Comments

Total number of comments (use dashboard)

Months

08

09

10

11

12

01

Total


0

0

4

0

4

0

8

Most comments on:

Titles of posts with link

Dates of posts (yy.mm.dd)

Qualities of comments*[*]

Any one of your movie reviews

none



When did you respond to those comments?

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How did you respond to those comments?

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Any of your other posts*

Dinner


good

When did you respond to those comments?

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How did you respond to those comments?

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nothing

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* Current semester comments on essays and other posts
** Please list the most important qualities of comments on each type of blog post.

Recent comments display

Does your blog display recent comments from blog visitors in a prominent location, for example in a sidebar, header, or footer widget? Where or why not?

  • I didn’t get many comments and responded them.0

Additional reflections on comments

  • [I don’t get so many comments and I seldom response these.]

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3.0. Book Reviews


Short titles
with links

Dates (yy.mm.dd)

Words

Comments

Example:

Vampire Killer

07.05.16

39

1

2-01

Just Like a movie

2007.10.03

85

0

2-02

Black Beauty

2007.10.10

51

0

2-03

Sleepy Hollow

2007.10.17

56

0

2-04

Alice in Wonderland

2007.10.24

53

0

2-05

Bad Love

2007.10.31

119

0

2-06

Parallel

2007.11.07

112

0

2-07

The Big Picture

2007.11.14

186

0

2-08

Help!

2007.11.17

228

0

2-09

Hotel Casanova

2007.11.21

246

0

2-10

BLOOD DIAMONDS

2007.11.28

84

0

2-11

Men In Black

2007.12.05

180

1

2-12

LOST LOVE

2007.12.12

182

1

2-13

The Blue cat club

2007.12.21

186

1

2-14





2-15





2-16





2-17





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TOTALS:

1768

3

Note: Please calculate book review words and comments totals without the example (above).

4.2. Best Book Review

Selection and Assessment: Which of those book reviews do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Please remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.

  • [my best book review is Hotel Casanova. I could read enjoyable and could write review longer than another book review.]

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5.0. Additional reflections on your blog writing

  • I didn’t write blog constantly, but when I started write blog, I could keep writing long time. At first, I don’t like to write English very much because I didn’t typing many words and thinking sentences but now, to think and type sentences in English is not bothered me than before.

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6.0. Suggestions for your peers and successors

  • Do your best!!
  • You should take many picture to write English with them.

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2007年7月21日土曜日

FINAL WEI

How many words

in Week 1 (April 11-17) :(15 words)
in Week 2 (April 18-24) :(17 words)
in Week 3 (April 25-May 1) :(103 words)
in Week 4 (May 2-8) :(10 words)
in Week 5 (May 9-15) :(19 words)
in Week 6 (May 16-22) :(697 words)
in Week 7 (May 23-29) : ( 45 words)
in Week 8 (May30-June 5) : (0 words)
in Week 9 (June 6-12) : ( 56 words)
in Week 10 (June 13-19) : ( 603words)
in Week 11 :( 69 words)
in Week 12 :(235 words)
in Week 13 :(o words)
in Week 14 :(1578 words)
in Week 15 :(688 words)

Total words up to this point : ( 4135 words)



How many posts

in Week 1 (April 11-17) :(1)
in Week 2 (April 18-24) :(1)
in Week 3 (April 25-May 1) :(4)
in Week 4 (May 2-8) :(1)
in Week 5 (May 9-15) :(1)
in Week 6 (May 16-22) :(3)
in Week 7 (May 23-29) : (1)
in Week 8 (May30-June 5) :(0)
in Week 9 (June 6-12) : (1)
in Week 10 (June 13-19) : (6)
in Week 11 :(2)
in Week 12 :(3)
in Week 13 :(0)
in Week 14 :(11)
in Week 15 :(8)

Total posts up to this point: (43)


Are all your posts labeled? Yes
Do you have a label element in your sidebar? Yes
Do you have a picture in your self intro? Yes
Do you have a feed in your sidebar? Yes
Do you have a list of links that feature links to 4 other students' blogs? Yes
Do you have Kumamoto Links in sidebar? No
Do you have other links in sidebar? Yes
Do you have reviews on Amazon (linked to from blog)? No
Do you have listmania lists on Amazon (linked to from blog)? No
Do you have any wiki or similar contributions (linked to from blog)? No
Do you have advanced media (Slideshare, Bubbleshare, etc.)? No

Link to your book reviews here
Book Review 1-01 (29 words/ bad)
Book Review 1-02 (29 words/ bad)
Book Review 1-03 34 words/ bad
Book Review 1-0438 words/fair
Book Review 1-0550 words/fair
Book Review 1-0638 words/fair
Book Review 1-07 (67 words/fair)
Book Review 1-08 (48 words/fair)
Book Review 1-09 (52 words/fair)
Book Review 1-10 (80 words/good)
Book Review 1-11 (91 words/good)
Book Review 1-12 (103 words/good)
Book Review 1-13 (80 words/good)
Book Review 1-14 (67 words/good)
Book Review 1-15 (106 words/good)


Link to your essays posted to your blog here
Essay 1-01 (157 words/good!)
Essay 1-02 (224 words/good!)
Essay 1-03 ( 216 words /good!)
Essay 1-04 ( 227 words/good!)
Essay 1-05 (229 words/good)
Essay 1-06 (265 words/good)

How many posts
with link(s): 1
with 1 picture/photo: ( 32 posts)
How many complex posts? (at least 2 links and 1 photo): 0

Comments (look in your dashboard):
How many comments are there on your blog? I have 9 comments.
Have you made at least 8 comments? Yes
Please link to the 8 comments you think are best.
Ayumi's blog:1 2
Yui's blog: 1 2 3
Asumi's blog 1
Mezumi's blog 1
N.Rina's blog 1

Please link to your best non book review, non essay blog post. Why do you think it is your best?
I want to eat (^0^) T.Yui's blog


Please link to your best comment on another blog. Why do you think it is best?

2007年6月20日水曜日

MY WEI 1-2

How many words

in Week 1 (April 11-17) :(15 words)
in Week 2 (April 18-24) :(17 words)
in Week 3 (April 25-May 1) :(103 words)
in Week 4 (May 2-8) :(10 words)
in Week 5 (May 9-15) :(19 words)
in Week 6 (May 16-22) :(697 words)

in Week 7 (May 23-29) : ( 45 words)
in Week 8 (May30-June 5) : (0 words)
in Week 9 (June 6-12) : ( 56 words)
in Week 10 (June 13-19) : ( 603words)
Total words up to this point : (1565 words)



How many posts

in Week 1 (April 11-17) :(1)
in Week 2 (April 18-24) :(1)
in Week 3 (April 25-May 1) :(4)
in Week 4 (May 2-8) :(1)
in Week 5 (May 9-15) :(1)
in Week 6 (May 16-22) :(3)

in Week 7 (May 23-29) : (1)
in Week 8 (May30-June 5) :(0)
in Week 9 (June 6-12) : (1)
in Week 10 (June 13-19) : (6)
Total posts up to this point: (19)


Are all your posts labeled? Yes
Do you have a label element in your sidebar? Yes
Do you have a picture in your self intro? Yes
Do you have a feed in your sidebar? Yes
Do you have a list of links that feature links to 4 other students' blogs? Yes
Do you have Kumamoto Links in sidebar? No
Do you have other links in sidebar? No
Do you have reviews on Amazon (linked to from blog)? No
Do you have listmania lists on Amazon (linked to from blog)? No
Do you have any wiki or similar contributions (linked to from blog)? No
Do you have advanced media (Slideshare, Bubbleshare, etc.)? No

Link to your book reviews here
Book Review 1-01 (29 words/ bad)
Book Review 1-02 (29 words/ bad)
Book Review 1-03 34 words/ bad
Book Review 1-0438 words/fair
Book Review 1-0550 words/fair
Book Review 1-0638 words/fair

Link to your essays posted to your blog here
Essay 01 (157 words/good!)
Essay 02 (224 words/good!)
Essay 03 ( 216 words /good!)
Essay 04 ( 227 words/good!)

How many posts
with link(s):
with 1 picture/photo: ( 12 posts)
How many complex posts? (at least 2 links and 1 photo):

Comments (look in your dashboard):
How many comments are there on your blog? I have 8 comments.
Have you made at least 8 comments?
Please link to the 8 comments you think are best.
Ayumi's blog:1 2
Yui's blog: 1 2 3
Asumi's blog 1
Mezumi's blog 1
N.Rina's blog 1

Please link to your best non book review, non essay blog post. Why do you think it is your best?
I want to eat (^0^) T.Yui's blog


Please link to your best comment on another blog. Why do you think it is best?

2007年5月21日月曜日

My WEI

How many words

in Week 1: (32 words)

in Week 2: (67 words)

in Week 3: (21 words)

in Week 4: (733 words)

Total words up to this point: (853 words)





How many posts

in Week 1: (2)

in Week 2: (3)

in Week 3: (2)

in Week 4: (3)

Total posts up to this point: (10)


Are all your posts labeled? Yes
Do you have a label element in your sidebar? Yes
Do you have a picture in your self intro? No
Do you have a feed in your sidebar? Yes
Do you have a list of links that feature links to 4 other students' blogs? No
Do you have Kumamoto Links in sidebar? No
Do you have other links in sidebar? No
Do you have reviews on Amazon (linked to from blog)? No
Do you have listmania lists on Amazon (linked to from blog)? No
Do you have any wiki or similar contributions (linked to from blog)? No
Do you have advanced media (Slideshare, Bubbleshare, etc.)? No

Link to your book reviews here
Review 1-01 (29 words, my 'grade' bad/fair/good)
Review 1-02

Link to your essays posted to your blog here
Essay 01 (157 words, my 'grade' of my essay, bad/fair/good!)
Essay 02 (224 words, my 'grade'of my essay, bad/fair/good!)

How many posts
with link(s):
with 1 picture/photo: (5 posts)
How many complex posts? (at least 2 links and 1 photo):

Comments (look in your dashboard):
How many comments are there on your blog? 1 comment from Mr, Tomei
Have you made at least 8 comments? No, I haven't
Please link to the 8 comments you think are best.


Please link to your best non book review, non essay blog post. Why do you think it is your best?


Please link to your best comment on another blog. Why do you think it is best?
Yui's blog

she likes Korea and movies.